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Olden Zorros Day's and Imperial League

Silver911

Well-Known Member
Slicer
Zorros was by far the BEST town on loka. Zorros origins started like this. RayWard54 Sent by King Fox Rayward made Zorros with his friend Jaimeees and his little brother Tigerbird. They didn't build walls till later in the game but they decided to because of the Imperial League. Everyday NovaSolux would raid them because Neutral towns were dangerous to him and he doesn't like people being neutral. Zorros later joined with Byzantium and Aureum in the Imperial League. Then I joined and attacked the Covenant after Thanius_ raided us knowing he was in The Covenant at the time. SO the Imperial League got Zorros out and declared what is known as the Aureum Civil War. Aureum lost and Zorros was supposed to rejoin but that's when Nova declared Byzantium was leaving Imperial League. Later Aureum and Zorros Had massive destruction due to The Rise of Valentia. I am still around to tell the story of the friendly and sad tales of Zorros.
 

Noloite

Member
Do you ever use commas? Just some constructive criticism, I hope I don’t offend you - but this story doesn’t flow well. It’s just a collection of ideas, they don’t really connect with each other.
 

jmeatball

Member
Slicer
Theres a lot to be added here, you referenced a lot of events and failed to show their effect on the Imperial League, perhaps add more detail and be more specific as to what events effected what? Other than that this was really interesting and I hope you expand on this history.
 
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