Tales of a Potato: The Fall of Elrohir

[TheFragileBlade]

I have written a short story about the fall of Elrohir for your reading pleasure. Thanks for reading and I look forward to providing more stories like this in the future! Please leave any constructive criticism in the comments to help me improve in the future. Thank you!

Link to the story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ABW7GGeJtGAZCt3WqHqpSYihh3ZhIe7lOEIsP02fT-g/edit?usp=sharing

 

[Cryptite]

I love it! Next time I'd suggest just pasting the content of the story in your post, rather than as a separate google doc. Feels more immersive.

Look forward to more of your story in the future!

 

[TheFragileBlade]

I love it! Next time I'd suggest just pasting the content of the story in your post, rather than as a separate google doc. Feels more immersive.

Look forward to more of your story in the future!

Yeah I was gonna do that but the way I had it written refused to paste on to the forums correctly. Haha.

 

[SilentStormSix]

I saw potatoes and I was attracted to this post

 

[Haldyir]

Very nice piece, can’t wait to read more.