The Bad Luck Spectrum

[Falksi]

Hmm, I was very unsatisfied with how I had written my backstory. I had basically pushed through it out between writers block and some pretty negative feelings. Not a good time for me to write. I have no idea how to delete this thread from the forums completely, so I'm just replacing it with this for now. I apologise for my failed writing

 

[gabrosen]

Wow, this is really good! I can't wait till the next part! I really like the effort you put into writing this! I love seeing new players participate in writing their player lore!

 

[Iyoforeayo]

Love this! I'm excited to see where it goes

 

[Ajaxan]

I didn't realize just how good of a writer you were Falksi! Please keep writing, this is a fantastic read. Watch out Iyo, you've got competition.

 

[BorkMork]

I love how you gave life to the world you are in, to the Roofed Forest, to Aladra, and the characters involved. You stick to the structure of the world that's already put in place, and made your character fit right in. I'm sucked in, but I await more.

 

[Ajaxan]

I've always imagined Loka as a world without technology and so I never really mention it in writing. But then again, we have specific chat channels from which I can easily address only certain groups of people. I guess I just never thought how to explain such an odd ability. In this case, a little black box makes much more sense than some sort of weird telepathy or the like.

 

[Xovious]

Way to go on making me sound so hostile and mean ;( I was genuinely asking because you seemed lonely D; But still very good story so far

 

[gabrosen]

I really liked this!

 

[Falksi]

Way to go on making me sound so hostile and mean ;( I was genuinely asking because you seemed lonely D; But still very good story so far

It was intentional, but I didn't mean to upset you D:
All for the sake of the story right now..

 

[Jedoi]

NOOOOOO KAL.

 

[BorkMork]

Nicee, although Kal dying is rather a somber tone, but what can I say, I'm a sucker for bitter endings. Keep up the good work bro.