I'd like to just start off by saying I'd like to eventually see you back on the server. I don't hold any ill will toward you and I'd like to see almost anyone who's been banned mature and want to come back as a more amiable person. That being said, I am honestly pretty disappointed to see that this appeal is hardly changed from an appeal that was written entirely by someone else.
I'm not trying to imply that it's not okay to ask for HELP in writing an appeal, but barely writing anything for yourself just shows that you couldn't have cared that much. It's cropped at the moment in case they want to stay anonymous but it was sent to you, you(or maybe even they, since they said they'd work on it more, I'd left by that point) added 1 or 2 sentences, and posted it here 4 days later. Even the person that actually put in the effort to write the appeal clearly didn't care about it as they later wrote. . .
Hopefully you're back online raiding my town at some point, but with the low effort put into this appeal and how recent your permanent ban was, I can't support it.