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Book. Involves names and all of you.
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mopb3 said:
One word description.....That's helpful...any other details?
If not, I'll go with Laz's idea.Lazuli73 said:
And, um, why did you call Laz "dear"? I find that weird. lolmopb3 said:
Also frivolous is a funny word. lol. Its fun to say. Frivolous. lol. Frivolous frivolous frivolous.
MinecraftJedi127 said:mopb3 said:
One word description.....That's helpful...any other details?
If not, I'll go with Laz's idea.Lazuli73 said:
And, um, why did you call Laz "dear"? I find that weird. lolmopb3 said:
Also frivolous is a funny word. lol. Its fun to say. Frivolous. lol. Frivolous frivolous frivolous.
I am his secret lover. He is cheating on his unicorn with me.
I have dark brown hair, almost black. My hair is long and straight and goes half way down my back. I have light blue eyes. Pale skin. I am well kept , my skin is soft and it is clear I come from a life of privilege. I often wear black or blue outfits. I have knee high boots with a knife hidden in them. My clothes are often somewhat revealing. I have smoky eye makeup and my lips are stained red.
An unedited version. Anything I should take away, add, or change, I'd be glad to hear.
Chat (PCN) is an interesting thing. It announces things and you sort of see it in your mind’s eye. Like, when we all heard, “Name (CN) has arrived through the Knife”. I knew most people who joined would die. So I decided to help Name out. (E)
I moved my door-stone away and left my shelter. I blinked as the rising sun shone in my eyes and I turned and ran in that direction. I crawled under a bridge and leaped across a small brook. (E)
The shiny, white Tower rose higher than the mountains surrounding it. A green canopy of trees and bushes and a tiny light rested at the top. Squinting, I looked closely at the floating, black-purple stones floating on each side of the perfectly cubic yellow, glowing, lightrock. The Artifact.
I ran past into a tunnel, across a bridge over a pool of water, bringing me to a staircase winding upwards. I climbed up and looked around the inner Tower. Directly in front of my was a raised platform, and on it stood a -bewildered woman with red hair and dark clothing-(E, CD). She looked startled that anyone was here at all. “Hello.” I said, nodding.
“I’m looking for a few people. Have you heard of the Slicers? Is this the right place?” Name asked, recovered from shock. “Nope. Go home.” Psy’s voice said. “Yes, you are here. Welcome to Loka.” A voice I didn’t recognize replied. Name stepped down the stairs leading to the stand and walked to me. “What is happening? Are those all your voices...” She died off. (E)
“No.” I replied. Suddenly, I heard a clap of thunder and a person was standing on the platform. He had longish brown hair and brown eyes. There was a certain characteristic of him I couldn’t quite place. Like someone who has seen many battles, many unexplainable things.
Crypt, is that a good "introduction paragraph" as I call them? Want me to change anything there?
Chat (PCN) is an interesting thing. It announces things and you sort of see it in your mind’s eye. Like, when we all heard, “Name (CN) has arrived through the Knife”. I knew most people who joined would die. So I decided to help Name out. (E)
I moved my door-stone away and left my shelter. I blinked as the rising sun shone in my eyes and I turned and ran in that direction. I crawled under a bridge and leaped across a small brook. (E)
The shiny, white Tower rose higher than the mountains surrounding it. A green canopy of trees and bushes and a tiny light rested at the top. Squinting, I looked closely at the floating, black-purple stones floating on each side of the perfectly cubic yellow, glowing, lightrock. The Artifact.
I ran past into a tunnel, across a bridge over a pool of water, bringing me to a staircase winding upwards. I climbed up and looked around the inner Tower. Directly in front of my was a raised platform, and on it stood a -bewildered woman with red hair and dark clothing-(E, CD). She looked startled that anyone was here at all. “Hello.” I said, nodding.
“I’m looking for a few people. Have you heard of the Slicers? Is this the right place?” Name asked, recovered from shock. “Nope. Go home.” Psy’s voice said. “Yes, you are here. Welcome to Loka.” A voice I didn’t recognize replied. Name stepped down the stairs leading to the stand and walked to me. “What is happening? Are those all your voices...” She died off. (E)
“No.” I replied. Suddenly, I heard a clap of thunder and a person was standing on the platform. He had longish brown hair and brown eyes. There was a certain characteristic of him I couldn’t quite place. Like someone who has seen many battles, many unexplainable things.
Crypt, is that a good "introduction paragraph" as I call them? Want me to change anything there?
