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Commander_12

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Commander_12 (otherwise known as Andy) was born in the small, bustling city of Grimdale to normal and unassuming parents. Life in Grimdale wasn't easy though for Commander's family, as they were in extreme poverty and lived in one of the roughest and crime-ridden neighborhoods of all the city. The city was always in turmoil, as the government controlling it was ineffective, being constantly overthrown and fought over by competing factions and rioting and looting were commonplace in the city. Famine and disease were also widespread among the people of the city, with many people leaving to the North to find a better life and many were slain in the streets everyday over the simplest of things. Someone would incredibly lucky if they lived past the age of 35. However, Commander's parents wanted him to live a better life then they had lived and to escape the extreme poverty and famine that constantly plagued their lives. So, when Commander was six, his parents shipped him off to go live with his uncle in the North, far away from the political turmoil and social turmoil of the Southern cities.

Now, Commander's uncle was a colonel in the Northern city of Crowmere's army and he intended to raise Commander to become a proud and honorable man and to fight against the corruption and instability plaguing the land. The land which Commander had been born into was once a proud and glorious empire but after a few hundred years, it had started to fall into disarray and leaders ( who had been democratically elected) had become corrupt and refused to step down from their positions of power, becoming tyrants and dictators and they brutally oppress the people and their rights, leaving them as shells of their former selves. This political bureaucracy and nightmare were only worsened by the constant uprisings of workers in the Southern cities under their control and the empire was in the midst of a third civil war, with both sides at a stalemate. The government controlled the Western part of the country (which contained all the mining resources and biggest cities) while a socialist government controlled the Eastern part of the country ( They had all the grain fields and forests, but they lacked control over any major, huge cities). Also within these territories, there were many factions fighting for control of the land, with many groups fighting inside in the respective territories, leading to even more instability. This is the world in which Commander_12 grew up in. A dark, corrupt and terrible world. But it was going to get much worse than it already was.
Starting from the time, he arrived in Crowmure, Commander was trained to become part of the military and to help defend Crowmure from both the government, the socialists, and any other competing factions that seeked to take over Crowmure ( due to it being the most stable and powerful city that was not under the control of the empire). Commander endured brutal and harsh training, learning to become the perfect soldier. Overtime Commander became that man, a hard and cold man, rarely showing compassion, unlike when he was younger and still filled with hope. This war, this country had destroyed him. He witnessed many terrible and horrible things, things that are unspeakable. He did things, for the sake of defending his adopted town, which was unforgivable and unspeakable. Commander would never be the same. Until the day the dead started walking again.
It was like any other day, sunny and not a cloud in the sky. Commander was attending his regular sparring class, taught by his uncle. Then suddenly, the alarm went off. It was the alarm for when they were being attacked. Commander rushed to the top of the bell tower, to see what was happening. He looked on, through the pine forest, be he did not see a single thing. He thought to himself: " Who's attacking us? What's happening?"
And then his question was answered. There was an explosion way off in the distance at the guard tower, meant to watch for government forces and militias prowling and pillaging the land. Commander could hear over the loud speakers:
" We are under attack, repeat we are under attack... the guard tower has fallen... repeat.. the guard tower has fallen... prepare your weapons."
Commander unsheathed his bow, grabbing an arrow from his pack, waiting for the oncoming threat to come upon him and then he saw it. The attackers. But these weren't government forces or factions, no it was something else entirely. It was monsters.
The monsters came running at full speed, decked out in full diamond armor with swords and bows raised in their fists. They looked very much like your average player, but their faces were decaying and their bodies and skin were a hideous green. Commander could hear screams coming from outside the wall of the town, singfinying that they were losing. Commander was not going to go down without a fight. Soon, the zombies came pouring over the town walls and became to swarm and attack the townsfolks and soldiers, eating their flesh and adding to their numbers. Commander started firing his bow with rapid-fire precision, taking out scores of zombies with headshots. Commander thought to himself: " No, we must not lose this town, this is all I have left."
But soon, the fight was over. The zombies had won due to their numbers and stamina. Commander was trapped in the bell tower. Commander looked in the distance and could see something even more terrifying than the zombie soldiers; he could see giants. These giants looked much like their zombie counterparts, but were bigger and terrifying and clamping down trees as they walked. Soon, five giants surrounded the town and Commander stood in awe, studying the beasts for their size and nature. Soon, it appeared that the zombies were surrounding the bell tower more and more, leaving Commander even more isolated. He was about to swarmed. Commander was going to die.
"Well, shit. It was nice while it lasted." He said out loud.
But suddenly, a voice from behind startled Commander. He turned around to see that it was his uncle, but he was heavily wounded and appeared to be in great pain.
" Andy... get out of here. I've set this bell tower to blow. There is a way for you to live and escape. Here take these Elektra and fly, fly away."
Commander grabbed the Elektra, put it on preparing to fly away. However, his uncle grabbed him before he prepared to fly away.
" My nephew... there is a portal... way up in the mountains... it leads to another world... another world... a world I know nothing about. This world is done. Your parents were killed in the zombie siege of Grimdale, and we are the last beacon of resistance in this undead world... the government has fallen and the civil war is no more thanks to these monsters. All of the factions, are dead and are part of the ranks of the living dead."

He continued on:
" My boy, the only thing I know about that world is it's name... Loka. But again, I do not know what you find on the other side of that portal. And after it, I have set a trap that bury the cave in which it is in, under rubble so that the zombies cannot have access to it. Go now, my boy. I will finish these monsters off."

Commander looked at his uncle with sadness and he took off, flying past the giants who attempted to grab him and pull him down and kill him. Commander had left Crowmure. He was the only living survivor left in his world. Commander looked back while he was flying away and he could see the resulting explosion that his uncle had caused. The whole town of Crowmure and the zombie armies all went up in a giant blaze of fire and smoke and explosions. There was nothing left for Commander in this world.
"Goodbye, my dear uncle." he said.
...
Commander reached the cave in the mountains to which his uncle had given him a map to. It was a dark and brooding cave with veins of iron and coal surrounding the walls of it. There was a small structure in the middle of it, built out of stone brick and mossy cobblestone. Inside the structure was the portal to the other world, Loka. This is where Commander would start his new life. He stepped down into the cave, quickly making his way to the small structure. There was an iron door with a pressure plate in front of it, and Commander hesitantly walked over it, hoping he wouldn't trigger a trap. He put one foot on it, bracing for it, but it did not come. He stepped inside the structure and finally saw the portal. It was blue and swirling, much like the portal that connected to the Nether. But this one gave off a different vibe. It felt much more surreal and Commander looked through it and he could stars and grass on the other side. He was ready to start his new life.

He walked slowly towards it, feeling nervous about stepping through it. He took a deep breath and then ran at full speed, pushing away all his worries and doubts. He was going to live. There was nothing left for him in this world. His parents were dead, his uncle sacrificed himself and the empire was under the control of the living dead. He had to go, he thought. And he then he finally the blue wall. And just like that, Commander stepped through the portal, into the brave and unknown world of Loka.
...
When Commander stepped through the portal, he immediately noticed a bright and colorful town, unlike he had ever seen before. The world looked very much like his own, but it was much lively and it appeared as if it was much alive then his. He stood on the path leading into this town, not knowing what would happen. He soon came to the town square and he could see that the name of the town was Aldara. It was a beautiful town, containing many market stalls with many people in the streets, buying stuff and sailing on ships to god knows where. Airships also flew over above, capturing Commander's imagination and eyes. He sneezed and went: " Ach-Aladrianchamelonedonkeytown-oo".
Commander was tapped on the back and he saw three players in full diamond armor, wanting to get his attention. One had a nametag of Xovious over his head, while the other two were named Jedoi the Last and Wizardteepot.
"Welcome , Commander_12." Xovious said
Commander smiled. He walked and shook Xovious's hand and asked:
" Where am I?" asked Commander.
" You are in Aldara, the capital city of Loka, you have traveled far my friend."
" Now, where are you from?" Jed asked.
Commander gulped and said:
"Well... this may totally crazy to you..."
And just like that, Commander became a citizen of Loka, going on many adventures, traveling across the land. He decided to settle down in the town of Auru and he quickly rose in it's ranks, becoming one of it's leaders. As of present day, Commander is currently residing in Auru and is building his house and dying many times while mining. This is the story of Commander_12 and his many adventures. The saga will continue and Commander_12 shall return for new adventures.
*Cue James Bond theme song like they do at the end of the movies."

The End
 
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